Cruising on the Jenny Green

AWESOME story!!!

Great story!! I was grinning from ear to ear....

I think I'd like to have a cruise boat...

I loved this story from start to finish! Wonderful characters and a great setting!

Loved it

Ronde is the best!!! Keep up the great work, Vee

Jimi's seal of approval!

ronde has always been one of my favourites... I'm glad I waited a couple of years to savour this one!

BTW, a sequel would be excellent.

Among the best....

Of all the Literotica I have read, this is at the top of the list!

jhd123

Another awesome story!

Once again ronde delivers the goods!

another wonderful story

Only complaint would be the use of the "f" word. For me it just takes away from the sensualness. But wonderfully written, draws you into the story immediately.

two words. mindblowingly awesome

great story. love to see a (or if already is one) the sequel

Good stody

When are you going to do a sequel to this? Loved it.

What a great story!

Love it from the begining to the end. Ronde would love to read about there next trip. Keep up the good writing.

As always

Ronde has done a fine piece of work.

Jenny Green sequel

Any more stories of the "Jenny Green" coming? Really enjoyed this one.

Fantastic !

A great mix of humour, great characterisation and realistic dialogue (not to mention good sex!). It's really nice to read a piece that just sparkles like the sun on the water!

enthralling

amusing
well written
MORE please

I LOVE the CRAB entertainment

Even if I hadn't liked the story, the crab bit would have made it worth reading.

-- srgeek --

Another good story

You are one of the few writers on here who know how to put across a good story with a sense of humour and the sex is not in your face - well done

awesome

just started to read your stories and I am hooked, would really like to hear more about the next cruise with these wild ladies and thier freinds.

Ah, the Jenny Green.

Excellent. Funny. Sexy and well written.

Juat Right!

Having messed around with boats on and off since age twelve, I found the setting of this tale appealing. Your captain obviously had the experience of a lifetime on this cruise, and you told it very well. You write with restraint and precision, and are a more accomplished writer than most of the amateurs whose stuff I read. I enjoyed the way you began with only minimal description, and let the scene and the characters grow in my mind's eye until I felt as if I were on board.

I'm going to click you into my favorite author category as soon as I finish this.

This is the first of your stories that I've read. I'll check for others. With your ability to set a scene and let a yarn spin out, I think you ought to write something longer, maybe a short novel. I think it would be a winner!

Isn't it amazing how being on the ocean always seems to bring out the best hormones in a women and they become abandoned. Loved your story - well written & would love to be able to read the sequel of the following year's cruise with the 4 women involved. Keep up the excellent work. Cheers

What is next with Brandy??

Great stuff

Brandy

Would have been nice if he and Brandy got together ...

Great Fantasy

Well executed and some decent repartee as well for a bonus

Happy

This was just fun. Some erotic and some sex, but alot of fun. The Captain and Brandy discovered some things about themselves. Brandy had a good time with Wanda and Marylin teasing him to get him primed for the coming evening. This wasn't romance and it wasn't just an anonymous fuck either. They had come on this cruise to have fun and they did and at the end made plans for the next year too. I think he needs to start drinking protein shakes or smoothies and working out several times a week to prepare for the next season. Especially if there are going to be four women to keep happy.

Gave it a 5 for jenny and you . The story is good and the

sex rocks. Fuck you annony! I gave it a 5