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A Small Mistake, Big trouble

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by 21stcv04/20/15

OOPS

Roll on chapter 2

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by Anonymous04/20/15

Looking forward

To chapter 2

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by Epiphany_Jones04/20/15

I like where this is headed.

Nice job, good writing, interesting plot. Looking forward to more.

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by Anonymous04/21/15

Good start

Well developed characters. Many women have changed their attitude, dress and behavior after hearing themselves referred to as a milf.

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by ramonbrook04/22/15

Really liked the story, but

Have to agree ..... WAY TOO SHORT! I like stories that you look forward to the next chapter, but you have have more substance to the story.

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