All Comments on 'The Devil's Bargain Ch. 02'

Well written, but boring. Where is the non-consent???

I like the way you write and the continuation of this story is well worth the long wait. Please don't make us wait again for the next installment.

I love all your stories! Please continue writing! Thank you

I was so shock to discovered you updated ! After 10 years ... Wow that's amazing . This gives me hope on all the other discontinue stories that one day they will be back ! Welcome back , and I hope you stay back ! Wonderful chapter , do hope for more non-consent though !! LOVED IT

Been waiting for yearsssss!!! happy that you update two stories please continue :)

so he is an arrogant idiot using virgin like a whore and know even wants "more"....................................................................................................knowing she thinks he despise her...how the hell would that "We shall see" work???

This is so great---updates to two storylines and within a few days of each other. Welcome back!

Good story....but it needs a Chapter 3 unless you would leave us hanging :) .......I found you held my interest and I wanted more ........ I also find no pleasure in being mean with criticism ... I find that is what an idiot does who is unable to render anything meaningful or helpful.......I am so sorry you have to subject yourself to that kind of banter when you are brave enough to put up what you write...keep doing it .....

This is great! Just found it today. Love the story!! More please?? And let's not wait long.

PLEASE CONTINUE S MANY QUESTIONS NEED ANSWERED!!!😘🙏

Cannot express through words just how happy I am to see you've returned!

Your stories - their sensuality and incredible attention to detail - has kept me coming back to re-experience them. I daresay this entry of The Devil's Bargain is one of your best. Please please please continue writing for your loyal readers!

P.s. We need more on Bree ;)

You're amazing, articulate, creative and really know how t capture the erotic side of our brains.. thank you for the smile.. the happiness you create in me when I read your stories

After writing my own novel and a handful of short stories, I'm so happy that there are still people who appreciate the value of lots and lots of adjectives and a beautiful story. Absolutely loved this entry as well as the first chapter. I'm thoroughly looking forward to any new entries pertaining to this series. I hope someday that you put all the chapters together in a book, this could really go places. Thank you for letting me believe that smutty literature can still be articulate again. You've truly been an inspiration.

This story and writing is some of the best that I have ever read on the site. Would have loved another chapter (or hint: story) to continue the two lovers and develop the great potential of the storyline. But, if the dates are correct, nearly 10 years between chapters is a bit much don't you think. Welcome back, and sincerely hoping for more from such a great writer.

I loved reading this story. I would love to read more. Will he succeed in winning her heart? Will he get the what was promised to him by her sneaky father?

Too good

Really enjoy your writing. Looking forward your next submission. Great story. So many possibilities...

You're very talented, both in creativity and writing. Looking forward for ch 3

Yes, this is very pleasing to me. Please write Ch. 03, I beg of you!

Even though as a reader I am left 'panting' for more .... Thanks for closing the story.

this cant be the end..please continue...😭

Just read the series... and yearning for more.

Moreeeeeeee pleaseeee

I really like this story! I wish you would continue it

Plsss write more!

The plot is good. You should try continuing this sorry. I would like to hear Wiham's POV..

This cannot be the end! I’m so wrapped up in this story I need it to continue please please keep writing

I would love to see what really happens next with these two people.

It should continue these characters are so strong and your writing so descriptive and skillful it would be a shame to stop now.

I wonder how they would navigate their marriage.

Ummm more plz. He needs to eventually tell her he knows she wasn't to blame, that he loves her and then kick her father's ass... and also get her a baby. :)

I need my HEA.

The story ends rightfully since all twists and turns are over and what remains is the mundane story of winning her over, if the author doesnt want to introduce new twists.

But, due to these two lovely characters, I wish it was not the end, just to see how these two would progress given the man is so different in approach and woman is naive and poles apart in this relationship.

Hence, rightfully ended, not stretched, though keeps readers longing to know more.

write more .

To say I love your stories is an understatement. As the majority of the comments attest, you are a brilliant writer. Please continue writing because you have a real gift for extending physical pleasure to the human body through words. While I agree with some that this is a good point to end The Devil’s Bargain, I’m eagerly awaiting the next twist in your other stories, particularly The Novice.

I hope you write a part three for this story. The long time between the first and and second installments was worth the wait!