All Comments on 'Konomama Pt. 01'

I think you meant cervix and not hymen. The hymen is the skin that tears when a woman's virginity is taken. The cervix is the entrance to the womb. Might want to correct that.

Lol, it seems I don't know how to edit my story. How do I go about fixing the error?

I loved your story! I can`t wait to read the next part.

But I belive that it would work better with only 3 classes of citzens instead of 5. And I hope you only took the great idea from the hentai, because it`s end is awful ^^

I really enjoyed reading this story and I'm looking forward to (hopefully) many more chapters to come!

Great story. can't wait for the next part.

Need more parts!!

I know part 2 is a little late, but I just submitted it. I assume it should be up in the next week.

Liked the idea of the story and will be reading more of it.

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

You gave the mayor a hymen. I would bet it bas been 20 years since she had a hymen. And you made the mailwoman into mailwomen.