Judy and I Tied the Knot

Crapshit

Worse story yet submitted.

Author is a fucking idiot.

Obviously mentally deranged.

Why the need to cheat?

Why the need to cheat? He was open to her have any man she wanted, so why did she cheated?They were a real pair of losers: "Judy had been married once before and I had been married and divorced 3 times"!!! Then came the exaggeration: "It had to be 13" long and bigger than my two wrist put together.". This is a bad story, worst written!!! 1*

Funny way to kill 5 minutes.

You know it sucked, but at least you didn't waste as much time on it as I did.

gave it a

5 for your effort and the story

Sick fuck

A Clue

So you were divorced three times by the age of 29. I was tempted to ask how you found three women to marry you until I read on and realised how unselective you are.

Needs proofreading

This story looks like you made no attempt to proofread it. It is just about unreadable as a result.

Loser

And now your divorced 4 times from a wife fuvking a spade on ur honeymoon... Pathetic

sad

It's sad she has already let him know that he can't even satisfy her the first day. Also lacking reality a female isn't going to take a fence post in the back with spit. That would most likely rip her.

Unreadable and unworthy

This was shit...

Bad plot,

bad plot, bad delivery, bad story!

great plot great story and great masturbation story

gave you a 5

Made no sense.

I fell asleep reading this. Please don't write a follow up to this, it was awful.

really

Is the honeymoon a good time to get some strange with complete strangers? Explains the multiple marriage habit doesn't it.

Suggestion: get editorial help, take a writing class....

....this was broken, flat and wholly uninteresting.
Too many technical problems to cite here. Poor characterization, choppy....oh, it goes on and on.
Look, try reading your story out loud (to yourself) and listen to how the words sounds. If it doesn't flow like real conversation, you will have to work on it until it does.
Then go through 5-6 times reading for grammar and spelling and get all that fixed, then re-read for sound and smoothness. Then read for plot and characterization and fix that. Repeat until it's squeeky clean.
Otherwise, don't bother.

Divorce no. 4 on the way!

now i understand the lousy score

a judging by the 3cuckold lovers that liked it, your story really must suck

I See

Marriage number five on your horizon.

Gave it a 1

for your effort and the story

another pile of dung polluting LW

1* for your effort. Worthless trash.

I Don't understand

why Literotica would allow such trash and bad writing. A vote of 1 only because they do not except negative numbers.

That was bad!

What is wrong with you!

Very good story!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe just 10 inches instead of 13 and one wrist width would have made it more realistic ;)

Not good.

Quit writing.

He'll stop writing stories when you stop writing your

asshole comments dear annony! God you are so fucked up in your head. I gave this story a 5!!