All Comments on 'The Lunar Life Ch. 03'

Hot kiss! I think my phone nearly melted.

I'm enjoying the progression of the story and characters. And ditto, hot kiss lol!

I love how this story isn't just based on the idea of sex. I love the little romance and the cutest of each character. I love the storyline and how it's different and interesting. Keep up with the good work and hope to see much more amazing works like this

The response I've been betting so far for this story has been phenomenal. I'm really glad you guys are liking this story. I know there are some people put off by the whole sci-fi theme but I guess if you like hunger games, you'll like this story.

Regarding how the story doesn't revolve solely on sex, that's just how I write. I have never written a story in which the main drive of the characters was sexual gratification. I think there are plenty on this site already, and honestly much better than what I can ever hope to write. My strength is story telling, not so much descriptive sex scenes.

As for the kiss, all I can say is that it gets hotter (and sweeter) in the future.

I'm glad i waited a couple of days to read these! Stories don't always have to revolve around sex. Even in real life it's a short period of time out of everything else. Generally speaking.

TM