All Comments on 'Another Top Up Maxine?'

you need an editor or proof reader for example one doesn't have bear feet they have bare feet

Those feet must have been quite hairy.

I enjoyed reading it. But wondered about a few parts (hmm)

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"She was sat next to me focused on the television wearing a bathrobe her bear feet resting on the coffee table in front of the sofa."

That is one freaky image. As if her hairy feet and claws weren't bad enough, the television is wearing a bathrobe.

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"I sensed she wanted some form of ascent from me as she was the one who had taken the lead"

I sensed she wanted me to get it up from behind, as she had positioned herself in front of me.

Pretty good story -- enjoyed it mostly. Here are some more spots that need fixing:

making too mush noise -- "much"

With out a word -- "without"

swallowed my entire length before felt her wetness -- "before I felt"

I began to lift my crouch up -- "crotch"

She climbed of me, my cock sliding out of her -- "climbed off of me"

she wanted some form of ascent from me -- "some form of assent"

really for making dear annony mad and bitching all the time. We all hope he'll drop dead.

""her bear feet"" - mmm...not sure about that, really put me off her LOL

I don't think Lit has a bestiality section.

;)