All Comments on 'Punishing Mommy!'

It's your mom don't treat them that way. especially kicking her. I know it's just a story, but don't give anyone that idea.

you must be one sick, sad bastard to even think about anything like that never mind writing it.

This tale is rushed and too vague in description. You made no effort to put the reader in the story. You made no effort to create characters to connect with. Your narrative is skimmpy and unclear. All-in-all this has to be one of the worst written tales on this site. If I didn't know better, I would swear it was your intentions to present this tale as an insult to the real writers of erotica. The best thing you can do is remove it and try to really create a storyline instead of the ramblings of a immature kid.

IF THIS IS A FICTION THE WRITER IS PSYCHIC AND IF THIS IS A REAL STORY THEN I ONLY ASK THE WRITER WHY DOESNOT THIS INSANITY COMPELLS YOU TO MURDER HER, KILL HER, END HER.

this story sucked, asshole..

I hope you go to jail or die

it honestly turned me off so much when i read this story that i turned off the computer and went and saw a movie

Do us all a favour and stop writing. From what little I read you couldn't write a half decent story if your life depended on it.

This has to be the worst story I have ever read. Don't give up your day job.

This is so far the worst story I've read. Sick isn't strong enough a word nor is stupid. What the fuck were you thinking?

Seriously this wasn't erotic at all it was the most disgusting thing I've ever read. I'm all for freedom of expression but this was way over the line. You fucking make me sick the world will be a happier place when your dead.

What a sick story, not erotic at all. Abuse is not erotic.

This 'story' is just totally disgusting.

This seems like sadism for the sake of it. Thats the authors prerogative but there were no other elements that balanced it out. A really bad childhood dude!!

I'd say this story was written without class.

You really should be put in jail and I hope that it was fake!

The world will be a better place when you die +1

you should be tacken out whiped tell you pass out thay have docters for your kind you should be locked up .

U GOT UR HEAD UP UR ASS WITH THAT STORY

that was pathetic

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This has to be the most nauseating story I have ever read, you are sick. Go and see a shrink you pathetic little creep. There is NOTHING to recommend about either the story or you. The world would be a better place without ass-holes like you.

you should be killed like a mad dog if all this is true....you are one sick asshole dude.......big issues

fucking sick,crap as fuck

I cant believe this you fuckin pansy/asshole/lunatic/retarded fuck/shithead/any other derogative term or terms. I have never said this about ANYONE! but you deserve it: There are not enough swear words in all the languages combined to adequately describe you.

I really hope this is not true cause if so you need to be killed where u stand i can't believe somebody would right shit like this

You should seriously DIE!!! you sick fuck. how can you write this shit!? Poe wasnt this sick!

That was Horrible. I would like to say more, but it would be a waste of time. I hope you are in proson now, or sood will be. I dont think you would be the one giving pain then. Frankly, I'm disapointed that Litterotica.com would even post this pointless trash.

Obviously it was only fantasy. So why are all you dudes getting uptight?

Pretty good story...would be better if the humiliation was in public.

what a sick story; how can someone write such shit

mate u are fucking wierd and should go kill yourself before someone else kills u!

I really don't understand people on here, who love the sickness of incest but can't handle a little S&M or other fetishes... Kinda sad, really... I mean, if you can enjoy a father screwing his daughter, why insult someone who writes about something just as twisted? Come on people. -.-

You are one sorry sick son-of-a-bitch and need a LOT of professional help.

That was the most sickest story I've ever read. Sicko

sick story yes, you should have more sex and less S&M

except for the scat shit, this was a good turn on. the mother bitch being degraded and forced to submit, subjugated whenever the son wants, is a secret desire expressed in many ways by others using more discreet symbolism. this was just honest - of course sick, but honest - perversion. no symbolism, just plain domination and sexual humiliation at the expense of a subslut mother who has submitted to being reduced to cunt, a mere piece of fuckmeat to be 'softened up' by flaggelation. many masochistic & ripe women dream of being put in their place like this.

You need to review your quality of writing

You deserve all the abuse you are getting, this story was frigging sick. Folk like you shouldn't be allowed near a pc, or allowed out of a lunatic asylum. Thank goodness you appear to have stopped writing. Pity you wouldn't stop breathing. It wasn't Incest, it was just sick.

m8 u sick fuck, u disgust me u should kill yourself

you are a sick person. please stop writing

That's three minutes of my life I'll NEVER get back. Thankfully, I read fast.

Makes me wonder. The comments. They all obviosuly like incest but can't handle the other fetishes within the story. Bit weird.

I agree with the other comments that the world will be a better place when you die. Or better yet maybe you will go to jail and get beaten and ass raped everyday and if your really lucky maybe someone will tie you to the floor and shit on your face you sick fuck.

That was the most sickest story I've ever read

that was the most horrible story I read and it does look like u stopped writting you must not love your mother to treat her like that in the first place.

ok, to the people who think this story is true... ??!! NO. There is another story that is about the reverse event- mother punishing son. And they are both excellent stories.

I lol at all you people hating on this. You all call him sick and twisted yet here you are commenting on an incest story (me too).

This isn't much of a story, though. It started out as a story then just went...I dunno hard to describe what it turned into...but was still really nice to read.

I really do hope there's another version of this story, but as a story, like how the mother got to be at this stage and stuff.

Regards,

Stevie

Sorry thats the worst i have ever read

This is rape him know