by 1DurtyMutha
Liked it, all except the girl on girl action that is a complete turn of for me would have been happier if was none of that, but the rest was great.
i love this series. after reading this last chapter, i was looking for more only to realize that it was just recently posted. (sad face). i eagerly await for the next chapter
But, it's just a start! ;) There's an eternity to fill with adventure, sarcasm, and mysticysm.... Have at it! All chapters were well written, not just a 'fuck fest', and I definitely appreciate that. I'll be waiting for the next chapters.
I loved everything about this chapter it was so detailed and it wasn't about just sex there was a story behind everything. I hope you update can't wait to read more.
But it remains incomplete. Please add more, I like your story.