All Comments on 'Father, Forgive Me Ch. 02'

please continue

it's another reeeeealllllllllllllllly short story ...... i've didn't read everything -

i've only extremely quickly skimmed over .... from what did read

[ no matter how short ] " it's excellent \ it's fantastic " .... here's thing

about sequel you've done { it's obviously The Daughter's side of the story

after what happened church } which that's really awesome

HOWWWWWEVERRRRR ` what happened the scenario The Daughter

along with her friends being outside under sprinkler whileeeeeeeeee

her father watches scene which leads office door he's got getting opened `

Please Do Continue ...........

HOLY FUCK MORE PLEASE!!!

Wow! You have got to finish the story! – Jon Thomas from Tumblr

I've read, or tried to read, many stories here on Lit. Some are quite good, others are badly written to the point of not being able to read them. Yours is of the first category.

If I wasn't into watch porn videos for my solo sex sessions, your sexual descriptions would do it for me. Keep on writing.

A decent idea, flawed by the author's inability to keep the time-line straight. Like a bad cut from a director trying to hard to be interesting with 'tricks' instead of just a better, hotter, story.