I like the storyline so far but theres so muchto read with little happening, alot of it is just imagining things and wishing i skipped most of it to get back to the main story
I write erotica. I don't write pornography? What's the difference?
My stories have a plot, character development, dialogue, description, imagery, and tension. Sex is the last thing they have and not the first. If you want to read about naked, nameless people having sex without talking, then I suggest you read another write, one who writes pornography. If you want to read a real story, one that could be true and that can really happen in the real world, then please read and vote for my stories.
Moreover, even though he fantasizes and masturbates over it, what son would willingly and consensually have sex with his mother? Think about it. Would you have sex with your mother when you were 22-years-old? What would your friends say? What would your relatives think? How would you ever get a girlfriend after having sex with your mother?
Even more unbelievable, what mother would have sex with her son? Yet, as evidence by Shakespeare and Dr. Freud, mothers and sons have had sex all through time. My purpose in writing incestuous erotica is to show the reader how it's plausible that not only can a son have sex with his mother but also a mother can have sex with her son. Mothers and sons do have sex. Yet, when a mother has sex with her son, it's not some whore having sex with a stranger. I dare say that a mother and son, incestuous and consensual union is more loving.
When the time is right and the circumstances are as if lightning struck, incestuous sex between two consenting adults, especially a mother and her son, can be a magical as well as a memorable thing. For me to just write a shitty, little story with no plot, little character development, no dialogue, imagery, description, and tension with sex from the start to the end, is not my style.
The biggest difference between pornography and erotica is this. I don't tell you my story by lecturing to you (as I am now, lol). I show you my story through character development, dialogue, description, imagery, and tension.
There are plenty of writers on this site who write nonsensical stroke and masturbation stories but I'm not one of them. I'm not a whore or a pervert, I'm an erotic writer.
You have talent there is no question there but where you lose me as a reader is the constant imagine this and imagine that over and over again. I know it's a personal preference but I prefer text of thoughts with more actual events. But to each is own.
Susan, I agree you write erotica and I agree that you do it really well. Brilliantly, in fact. You, once again, have got, my 5 star vote. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks.
I love all your stories Susan and I agree that the tension and the uncertainty adds to the erotic nature of them. Other writers are often too obvious and the result is not as sexy as your stories.
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Like it so far
I like the storyline so far but theres so muchto read with little happening, alot of it is just imagining things and wishing i skipped most of it to get back to the main story
nake, naked, naked
You continue to feed my imagination. It keeps me coming back!
Pornography vs Erotica
I write erotica. I don't write pornography? What's the difference?
My stories have a plot, character development, dialogue, description, imagery, and tension. Sex is the last thing they have and not the first. If you want to read about naked, nameless people having sex without talking, then I suggest you read another write, one who writes pornography. If you want to read a real story, one that could be true and that can really happen in the real world, then please read and vote for my stories.
Moreover, even though he fantasizes and masturbates over it, what son would willingly and consensually have sex with his mother? Think about it. Would you have sex with your mother when you were 22-years-old? What would your friends say? What would your relatives think? How would you ever get a girlfriend after having sex with your mother?
Even more unbelievable, what mother would have sex with her son? Yet, as evidence by Shakespeare and Dr. Freud, mothers and sons have had sex all through time. My purpose in writing incestuous erotica is to show the reader how it's plausible that not only can a son have sex with his mother but also a mother can have sex with her son. Mothers and sons do have sex. Yet, when a mother has sex with her son, it's not some whore having sex with a stranger. I dare say that a mother and son, incestuous and consensual union is more loving.
When the time is right and the circumstances are as if lightning struck, incestuous sex between two consenting adults, especially a mother and her son, can be a magical as well as a memorable thing. For me to just write a shitty, little story with no plot, little character development, no dialogue, imagery, description, and tension with sex from the start to the end, is not my style.
I don't write pornography. I write erotica.
Furthermore...
Furthermore...(lol).
The biggest difference between pornography and erotica is this. I don't tell you my story by lecturing to you (as I am now, lol). I show you my story through character development, dialogue, description, imagery, and tension.
There are plenty of writers on this site who write nonsensical stroke and masturbation stories but I'm not one of them. I'm not a whore or a pervert, I'm an erotic writer.
@SusanJillParker... Not only do you write erotica...
You're good at it and even more than that, HOT
So there
I can't find the previous chapters
I like to read stories from the beginning and I can't find the previous chapters. What am I missing?
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Had to use a search tool but found them.
You have talent there is no question there but where you lose me as a reader is the constant imagine this and imagine that over and over again. I know it's a personal preference but I prefer text of thoughts with more actual events. But to each is own.
Another great story
Susan, I agree you write erotica and I agree that you do it really well. Brilliantly, in fact. You, once again, have got, my 5 star vote. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks.
Erotic not pornographic
I love all your stories Susan and I agree that the tension and the uncertainty adds to the erotic nature of them. Other writers are often too obvious and the result is not as sexy as your stories.
Five PLUS stars!
It is getting very hot around my place! Not weather - just your story! On to Chapter 4!
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