All Comments on 'The Club'

by Lovelylucie

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 9 years ago
Three in one evening?

I doubt it for a 50+ guy. Cut short the climaxes and make it more believable.

LovelylucieLovelyluciealmost 9 years agoAuthor
response to previous comment

In answer to the previous comment about the doubt of a 50+ having multiple climaxes - I am assuming the writer of that comment is not from the UK as British men are very virile and this actually happened with my husband and myself a while ago.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Dialogue

Please work on your dialogue, People don't talk like that. So stilted and awkward.

Also proofread. Too many silly errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Lucie, take no notice of the whingers. I liked your story and good on you and your husband for enjoying yourselves.

lisablissfullisablissfulabout 4 years ago
Not Realistic

My husband is probably younger than James, at 50, he's fit and satisfies my needs, but I know he'd struggle to get three erections so quickly after cumming. However I enjoyed it and wish I could join a similar club, I say me, sadly my husband can't agree to share

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