All Comments on 'Twins'

...but far from the best.

I remember we had a set of identical twins in our high school. They used to play games all the time, switching and pretending to be each other. It was like they read each other's minds, and they finished each other's sentences. They even had their own language they used just with each other. I tried to figure that out but never could.

I dated one of them several times, and yep, they switched on me but without fail I could tell, there were so many obvious differences. We never had sex but I did get to play with their boobs, they looked a lot alike but felt completely different. I bet to this day they think I didn't know but I did.

Twins can be a kick in the fanny, for sure. They really did manage to fool most people.

Thanks,

MGM

it was very well written.

Your story was fun and I think pretty truthful. Women can be very conniving, Men dont usually give them enough credit and get stepped on easily

Loved it! Thanks for sharing your story with us!

So infidelity is a no-no but being manipulated is a turn on? Regardless of whether he was truly manipulated or not (because if his secret knowledge) she was willing to make him believe she did something he wouldn't like just to get her way. To me, that is as bad if not worse than an affair. It is callous, selfish and reckless. I guess it must be okay since he regularly gets to sample sister's wares. What a wonderfully shallow trio of characters you've created. Thank God Bill's too dumb to know anything...except in your world he's probably getting all the strange he needs on his road trips. But I guess that is another story. (Hopefully, one where he contracts a disease and they can all share what a joy that is. Yea for Karma!)

Kind of fun. Of course the train wreck is coming, for any number of reasons, but that's for a more serious and engaged author. This was trite and shallow, but expect that was your goal.

reading the story, but I didn't want to forget to make this comment. (I guess I could start writing notes re each story.) Our narrator is just out of college, and he is already a "...successful business executive." Oh, and the tag sucks. "Twins" is just too obvious.

Did all four characters say "gonna," fuckin," etc? Other tag suggestions: four friends, two marriages, MFF, cheating wife, hair fetish. Why do I care? Bcs I'll forget the author and the title in a few days or weeks. If I want to come back to re-read this story I'll find it via a tags search.

I'm not sure what the impetus for this story was. I kept expecting it to introduce either eroticism or drama, but the sex was never much and there was absolutely no tension, emotion, or suspense. So what was the drive for telling us this? Writing a story takes time, thought, effort…you clearly have payoff of a kind in mind. I just can't see what it was.

Just a note that it is very disconcerting to go from past tense to present tense. I'm not a grammar Nazi, but present tense stories really turn me off. "He goes to her bed" is just bad writing. Unless you are there telling us what is happening right now, past tense is the correct form.

Didn't rate it because I usually rate for how satisfying the story is (not the grammar) when I'm done reading it and the tense thing kind of made it hard to identify if the content ending up being a good story or not.

Francis_Toliver

It seemed a so, so story, but thinking well the 3 characters were again no moral people!!! Was right for him to fuck his friend's (almost a brother) wife, but not the other way around? His wife let her sister fuck him, but got jealous because another woman approached him? 2*

Read better and worse. Writing was fine. Story - not so much. Cheers!

It is almost impossible to relate to a guy who fucks his friends wife, ( a friend no less who's father gave him a good job!) a wife who fucks her husbands friend and her sisters husband, and a wife that encourages her sister to fuck her husband. These people are arrogant, selfish, foolish and just plain stupid. Only Bill has any potential here and we never really get to know him, that would be inconvenient, we might sympathize with him and not care for the scum. This seems to be written by a cheater, or at least a person incapable of loyalty and without honor.

One small point. Sam said it's my birthday... as a twin she would have said it's our birthday. Still a good variation on the theme of twins.

But he wasn't a very nice guy and they were not good wives at all. And at the end I felt like there should be more to the story. I suspect this is the end and that there won't be a followup so my rating is only a 3.

And you want us to belive she wasnt getting strange in bills house .She sit this up so she could fuck around on her hubby .Now who was she fucking in collage behind his back when he was doing the sister .these to are cheating sluts and nothing more.Now where is the trust in this marrage? And the threat do what I say or Ill fuck your friend. Oh yea I want a marrage to her NOT! Wow I can see it now why dont our kids look like me Sam????

One star. All these "identical twin" tales have the same theme. How about coming up with a different "identical twin" ending. NOTHING original here!

A totally fun story. I liked it. *****

In college. You've been doing it all ready without knowing it. But I'd have told Bill, so he would know better than to marry a slut too.These guys though; they deserve each other on their road to hell.

Sometime there's anger because someone tells a good story. Twins are twins. Identical twins tend to like the same things aside from the occasional fetish

Interesting how second best married first. I'd have thought the twin that didn't marry the bosses son would have had to settle for second best.

But one twin embarrassed to see the other nude?

These are TWINS, but I digress

Suspend disbelief, Anonymous, it happens the same way every time...in...out...in...out.

this i s a first for this author , in terms of my memory, where the narrator doesn't have his balls progressively broken. Lynn excels , as per always, in speaking in a flippant offhand narrative voice, casually disclosing shock and awe, carnal events. Full marks *****.

Twins ! ... WOW !!

double the pleasure ... and: the sex is really good !

Hmm dont know why someone says is hard, to see who is who?. It easy twins dont have the same. Body language, moles and twins dont look 100% the same in the face, or maybe it just me because I’m a twin

Need I say more? 5*

Silly shit. That's all.

Really sick -- so why did I like it? So why did I give it 5*?

Stupid and juvenile. Glad you're gone.

Cute. 5*