The story has a lot of possibilities, but you're racing too fast. A little more time and a little more buildup would give a lot more heat. Just saying.
Awesome story, honest, real-I love it even as a bbw myself
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Whoa! Slow down, big guy!
The story has a lot of possibilities, but you're racing too fast. A little more time and a little more buildup would give a lot more heat. Just saying.
Beautiful
Awesome story, honest, real-I love it even as a bbw myself
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