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by Anonymous

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by sbhammer05/02/15

A Dud

Wow, this story really bombed. Anyone care to let me know why or how it could have been improved?

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by Anonymous05/07/15

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For me it seemed a bit short with a abrupt ending that doesn't seem to match the title.

Possible Recomindations:
Try to make the ending seem less abrupt.

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by sbhammer05/07/15

Thanks!

You're right about the title and the ending. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate the feedback!

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