All Comments on 'Torn Between Two Brothers'

I wish you had kept the story going...

That was an awesome story. Hopefully there will be a next one.

This a very good story you should continue this, this FANTASTIC enough to be a published erotic book. Good going!!!!!

he had to sleep in a coffin in the buildings basement.

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why would he have to sleep in a coffin and in the basement instead of his own bed in a darkened room? writing modern day stories might as well stay with the theme- i liked the idea for the story- twin bros firstly- the vampire/were was kinda fun too. hope you or somebody else decides to write more