Wow! I have to applaud you for your marvelous introduction and build up. I was thinking another crappy writer, writes another shitty story, but you really have a talent... You know how to write without telling and your build up is amazing. Just jump right in there. I reiterate this was just amazing and left me captivated... As a reader I knew exactly what mental hospital the mother was released from and exactly the kind of reject you... i mean the character experiences. I would tell you to put a bullet in your head and end your life as a writer if you weren't so good.
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Anonymous05/02/15
Matt's doing a great job rudely throat-fucking his mother
Now I want to see the boy do an equally great rude job cunt-fucking her.
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Wow! I have to applaud you for your marvelous introduction and build up. I was thinking another crappy writer, writes another shitty story, but you really have a talent... You know how to write without telling and your build up is amazing. Just jump right in there. I reiterate this was just amazing and left me captivated... As a reader I knew exactly what mental hospital the mother was released from and exactly the kind of reject you... i mean the character experiences. I would tell you to put a bullet in your head and end your life as a writer if you weren't so good.
Matt's doing a great job rudely throat-fucking his mother
Now I want to see the boy do an equally great rude job cunt-fucking her.
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