I really love the idea and I think it's the first time I've read of something like this. Kudos for your originality but it seems Matthew is way too philosophical for the good of this story. How old is the mother-in-law Gina? We don't know. Aside from her 42 DD boobs, how tall is she? How does she look? What color is her hair? You've got really great potential if you include these necessary details--especially if you start including detailed or at least significant description of their mutual orgasms and how they felt, with the build-up, etc. Just don't rush the story and don't leave out those details or even the potentially most unique and hot story will get shot down in flames.
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Interesting premise of meeting the much-hated MIL
I really love the idea and I think it's the first time I've read of something like this. Kudos for your originality but it seems Matthew is way too philosophical for the good of this story. How old is the mother-in-law Gina? We don't know. Aside from her 42 DD boobs, how tall is she? How does she look? What color is her hair? You've got really great potential if you include these necessary details--especially if you start including detailed or at least significant description of their mutual orgasms and how they felt, with the build-up, etc. Just don't rush the story and don't leave out those details or even the potentially most unique and hot story will get shot down in flames.
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