Wow! Doing all the women in the household and connected friends every day!.....
....that would take some serious training and nutritional enhancement to pull off, even for a 22 year old.....and by the description, I take it that our hero is something past his twenties and probably his thirties.
Anyway, mom Sheila, daughter Noreen, daughter's friend unnamed, the maid Consuela....but who is Sylvie?
No, no, no, no. This will never do. Adding a character with no background or point ofe entry at the end of the story is bad form!
So. Either you plan a sequel, or you are a very, very bad boy.
To my Reader wondering just who Sylvia is., and where she came from.
Please see Chapter 4. She also goes by the name Mrs. Compton and has a friend/maid named Nicki. I hope that helps. That said, I'd like to thank you and my other readers for following my story. I really appreciate it.
Paris
English
dammed that condum for not breaking
Wow! Doing all the women in the household and connected friends every day!.....
....that would take some serious training and nutritional enhancement to pull off, even for a 22 year old.....and by the description, I take it that our hero is something past his twenties and probably his thirties.
Anyway, mom Sheila, daughter Noreen, daughter's friend unnamed, the maid Consuela....but who is Sylvie?
No, no, no, no. This will never do. Adding a character with no background or point ofe entry at the end of the story is bad form!
So. Either you plan a sequel, or you are a very, very bad boy.
To my Reader wondering just who Sylvia is., and where she came from.
Please see Chapter 4. She also goes by the name Mrs. Compton and has a friend/maid named Nicki. I hope that helps. That said, I'd like to thank you and my other readers for following my story. I really appreciate it.
Paris
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