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by fanfare05/12/15

wowie, zhazam!

S, this chapter is freakin' wonderful. Terrific World-building. I especially loved that bit about the different languages, when Tilly realized d all different sentients were all speaking different lingoes.

S, You continue to amplify the original story and you do not disappoint with your creativity.

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