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Fall Thru Ch. 03

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by fanfare05/13/15

Oohhh, a mystery...

...and a challenge!

A vampire, a serpent, a human, and two mages walk into a room . . . . I'm working on it, 'm working on it. Hmmm, maybe a limerick?

And the mystery of how the portal key was diverted. What & Who was the original intended user? What was their mission that was sabotaged?

Why was Tilly chosen to receive the Key? An error on the part of conspirators? Perhaps she was sent to serve as a diversion? Everybody watching her, are not watching their own backs?

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by Anonymous05/14/15

the plot

thickens

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by Anonymous05/15/15

Tune in tomorrow...

...same Bat time, same Bat channel, for the conclusion of this batty story.

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