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when budding madmen and their bitchy, milf Mils meet ?
Holy shades of young Don Draper ! I enjoyed this too much not to rate this at less than five stars. But the Hall of Fame story laid further in time detailing what happened when the wife and her father found out.
wow you may have predicted my future
I got arroused by the milf. I even cheer on the lucky guy. What I have learned I may have lost my BTB membership card due to my double standard. LOL
THANKS FOR THE STORY
Interesting story, but no matter what a bad one...
Interesting story, but no matter what a bad one...Why? 1st - No way the mother cheated with him for the first time...She for sure was cheating her husband since their wedding day...Sure also that her husband was fooling around...2nd - When we condemn cheating, i think we condemn any kind of cheating and any cheaters...3rd - he didn't accept the help from the in-laws to a better home and then he fucks his wife's mother? 4th - they have been fucking for four whole years and nobody noticed? 5th - If he didn't care about his wife, why the wish that she looked like her mother in twenty years? I usuall like this author stories, but not this one...If this was a try to write a satire about this kind of situations, the try failed to reach the goal...1*
Holy shit, batman
Wow -- that story was erotic to the nth degree! Did I say WOW? 5*
And the true loser is....
Tiffany. MIL is a whore. FIL is a wimp. And Tiffanys husband is a cheater.
Great Story
some folks below need to suspend disbelief.
Who was it that said, "the rich are different from you and I"? Even poor M-I-Ls have been known to screw their daughter's husband. It Happens.
This story has an element of believability to it that makes it fun, especially as a whore hiding behind her pretensions.
imhapless....I hate you!
You have written a story that leaves me....actually....Wow! I can't believe I'm saying this.
I am joining the BTB lynchmob and volunteering to chop wood for Charlene's pyre.
Erotica
Why be so moralistic while reading erotica. Fantasy is non-harmful. Read Enid Blyton if you don't want to be offended. Good story, enjoyed it, got hard, got on with life, thanks to the author.
Knew he was worthless...
when he used uber as a prefix...
Main character unlikable
Ch 2 should be about Tiffany burning both her husband and her mother. Unless, of course, it turns out that little baby Nancy isn't his.
One thing is sure
He didn't love Tiffany. He's as low as any bitch that cheated on her husband.
Not perfect, but not bad
On the whole I enjoyed the story & you obviously have a decent vocabulary and understand about story structure. I liked the characters and as someone else said, I try not to be too judgmental when it comes to erotica. However, I do prefer stories where the believability is at a very high level & the story started to go downhill for me when the dirty deed finally happened. I could understand him giving in so quickly but with no real mentions of guilt either during or after the act, the realism started to fade. I would have liked to have seen some investigation of emotions from all sides. I also agree with the comments about not getting caught or suspicions being aroused over such a long period - very very unlikely in such close family relationships. These are just personal preferences/opinions & overall more positive than negative - I will explore some of your other stories in due course. Thanks for the story :-)
good story
I liked the story but I'm not sure why. Well constructed, yes, but left a lot of background out about the mother-in-law. I don't like cheaters, on either side of the fence, but this story was something else, why? I'm not sure this situation should be considered cheating, I'm not even sure it can be called incest, because their not related by blood. then again by definition it was cheating. After his wife got out of the hospital, and returned to her normal self, it should have been broken off, that much I feel would have been the right thing to do. This was a nice example of thinking twice before you do something. I believe you can tell the difference between the young replies and the older replies. Nicely done.
AH-OOOH,,,,,TROUBLES GALORE AWAIT
and double OO was correct about Galore. TK U MLJ LV NV
5 stars
A fun wank tale. What's hotter than a gorgeous mother-in-law who takes whatever she wants?
Simple story done well.
A Different Story
The commentaries are almost as amusing as the story.
Why do we have uptight moralists on an erotic site?
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