Sara is such a great character. Love how you describe people: 'Gemma was a plastic' - that perfectly conjures up the Barbie-lookalike she is.
(I checked out one of your earlier stories before reading this; this is so much better. Your writing seems to have really improved. Much better back story and fuller ;) characterisation. Less typos too.)
Loved it. Great writing and a huge turn-on. It's your characters - so complete in such a short story.
I'm not sure what made me click on the link - not my usual genre at all, but wow...
A rare, but well deserved 5 stars from me.
English
Excellent fetish story
Sara is such a great character. Love how you describe people: 'Gemma was a plastic' - that perfectly conjures up the Barbie-lookalike she is.
(I checked out one of your earlier stories before reading this; this is so much better. Your writing seems to have really improved. Much better back story and fuller ;) characterisation. Less typos too.)
Superb
Loved it. Great writing and a huge turn-on. It's your characters - so complete in such a short story.
I'm not sure what made me click on the link - not my usual genre at all, but wow...
A rare, but well deserved 5 stars from me.
Excellent
Your story so matches how I adore hairy women. Got me so hot. I've only written one story so far, but have a look. Can't wait for more
the tone
and content
make me believe you think a natural woman is not normal. If you truly think that, this should have been posted in Fetish.
Very enjoyable
Love the hair myself, but anyway such good concise writing. Excellent.
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