All Comments on 'Ken Ch. 03'

Instead of searching the dictionary for words like that, and for those who don't know, it means, 'swallowed', work on your grammar, punctuation and word choices, by the time I got to 'ingurgitated' I was fed up with editing as I read, some sentences I had to read twice just to get it right. So I skimmed to the end and still not one character worth reading about.

I know the verb to ingurgitate, so I used it. It's that simple. I actually didn't use the thesaurus for that one, but you're right the word is rather informal and weird sounding in that sentence. About the characters, I'm sorry you feel that they're not interesting enough to read about. I like them, but I understand if you don't. To each his own?

So far so good, it could use slight editing but that's minor. This story has a lot of potential and can't wait to see where it goes!!

Proofreading is important, but other than that. I like where this is going.

I don't care what those people say finish this story it's amazing you have no idea how hard I've been looking for a believable interesting book!!! Please please start another chapter!!!!!!!

i dont like kendras attitude shes either boring or shouting all the time.

I like where you went. I'd like to see where Ken, Nick and maybe Shen end up!

More please I waiting on a new chapter