"Pet Mommy": Nerd Orgy

WOW!

Another excellent piece of the story! those lucky nerds and her lol would you ever dress up as princess leia? please let Seductions be the next chapter x

Fantastic

As always, another addition to a great series. Keep up the great erotic work!!!

Shorter than your normal texts, almost as if you had rushed it.

Keep up the longer stories.


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Who's who

Great stories but Fredrick or Simon I was confused but perhaps Michael should dom is grandma!!!

great!

Would have enjoyed a finale of the two sex kittens cleaning mommy up with their tongues, but no complaints!

Nice

Loved it Jasmine, looking forward to whatever else you dream up. It is always hot : )

nice

That was fun to read and exciting.

loved it!!

This is my second favorite piepiece from you, first being dp mommy. only complaint is that this feels rushed? Maybe longer like your other stories. Maybe a little more exhibitionist with the customs in public places?

Simon?

Mostly good, just confused about Frederick vs. Simon?

a well-written story, by a gifted author

SSL also is to commended on her great list of Favorites. But I just don't care for a son who subjects his mother to a gang bang. To me a mother's vagina should be sacred to her boy. He came out of that beautiful hairy hole between her legs, and there are lots and lots of sons who'd love to pay it a proper tribute. First, with their lips and tongue and whole greedy mouth. Then with the fat young cock between their own legs, now harder than ever before in their lives, ready for heavy duty action up their own mother's cunt. Why any boy should want to share his mother's mommy-hole with a group of other males is beyond me.

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I'm guessing the road trip involves going to visit sister?

Also the Simon vs. Frederick confusion in this story and between stories definitely needs to be decided one way or the other before the next story.

big bang theory big bang plus incest. Hot!!!

Love reading and stroking to your stories hot lady. Have only submitted one myself and you are inspiring me to do more

the next chapter

Definitely pet mommy: seductions . Dying to read about another milf submitting to her son

good, although there are some continuity problems

I just finished the series so far. I really enjoyed it. While I'll never understand the people that get upset about stories not being realistic, I have to admit some of the continuity problems really threw me off.

The Simon/Frederick thing was an issue for me. The first time it came up I was lost and it took me quite a while to get back into the story. I also paused at what looked like a Sarah/Betty problem.

I still love the stories and look forward to more. In my own sick twisted way I kind of wish there was something going on between Micheal and Frederick too.

great stores

I hope you do continue the saga. Great job!!!

Authors note

hi
Thanks for the comments on the continuity...
I'll have to go and fix those and send in a new draft, unfortunately I've been on the road and the story is sitting on my home computer....
Grrrr

Jasmine may 2015

great story

Really great story. I hope you add more and also cont. The bride submission one I'm looking forward to the family orgy.

Simons mom story

I vote for a seduction of simons mom. GREAT stories, great imagination.

Frederick's Mom

Looking forward to Frederick's mom joining the submission team. Maybe he has a sister or an aunt?

not the best in the series

I like this series, but this chapter seemed rushed and half assed to me.

Share Mothers and Wives

All mothers should like this story. I have had my wife do this one time. We had fifteen sons and fathers working on her. She sucked and fucked for hours. We took movies and pictures of the whole party. Seeing two dicks in mouth,pussy and ass at one time. After this happen we were invited to other parties where husbands have a party of their own. We have about twenty families in our group. Mothers and wives love having everything going on at one time. Having so many women you get different sizes and in makes fun. Sons get your friends fucking your mom and husband have your friends have fun with your wives. Love to show you my wife and let you share her. If you know who I am come and share.

Quite enjoyed it. I really like your writing, but I also thought that this wasn't quite as good as some of the other "Pet Mommy" stories.

Great Story

This was the first submission erotica I have read. I am very impressed and will be reading more of your content.

Off Track

This chapter seemed to be too far out of character for Michael and mommy slut. It lacked the true passion and intimacy shared by master and slave. Sorry SSL, but you missed on this one.

looking forward to the other chapters mentioned.

Yo love the story I would login to lazy but dude I'm subed to you and I can't wait for you to continue this series please continue

Keep up the good work

Keep them coming, I love all of the stories in this series! Plus I want to find out what happened with Freddy's mother

Off track is an understatement..

I have to agree with Whipthrob.. So Off trackside, what an understatement.. Nerds!! What were you thinking????. What happened to the Aunty and cousin???. Clearly you don't read the comments left by your readers to see which direction they would like this story to go. But there again you're the one writing this story and if you do decide to write another chapter ,I for one won't waste my time reading it. Clearly I'm really really really disappointed with this effect.. 1 star.. P.S
You can't possibly be the same writer who wrote the What Mom Knows series because that was a masterpiece .

Compelling story

This is such an enthralling story. While mom is submissive, she gets everything she wants. She in essence is in control. Great read. Please continue this, and please bring back his sister.

Great stories

Hurry up with more please

recomendations

dude write the last 2 and the twist on how u got her daughter was genius

MORE PLEASE

Come on please, you can't leave us hanging. Need to know about Frederick's mother among other unresolved plots

Ending needs more....

Nice story, but short... More details near end. And what about finish with a FFFM, after all M did get the younger women room #, but you did not use it or add them to the mix?!? A little lame...! DHD

RELAX

EASY GUYS IF YOU ARE A FAN OF THIS WRITER YOU KNOW THE STORIES CONTINUE IT TAKES TIME TO PUT OUT GOOD WORK..
THEN AGAIN I HOPE I WON'T BE TURNED INTO A LIAR!!!!

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I want to read about getting Frederick's mother to summit to him, and the Road Trip sounds very interesting too.

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Good series, I would like more details about Betty's looks, and banging more nerds.

Great Series!

Damn this is a great series! Does us all a favor and write the whole trefica Road Trip, Seductions and Mile High Club!

this has ben the best story ever

wow I think you could be a real good other ,I have stayed hard the hoal time every time I have read one of you mommy pet ch. this was better then a poren mag. for me
and look forwerd to the hopefully long suduceing of the mother and the road trip I have to give you a score of 100 this the best thanks for shareing your talent with us
if some one gave you a sunareeho could you turn it in to a strory? I dont know how to get ahoald of you but if you ever feel lke doing that I have few ideas but I am no wrighter . from DC newrancher

WOW!

Absolutely riveting. The whole series.

road trip

do road trip next

Road trip

ROAD TRIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

DAMN TOO SEXY!

I LOVED IT! Goodness... Please upload the next installment. It is needed.

Great story line

It's been awhile since you wrote your last chapter in this series. Please write it and post it soon. I am a huge fan of yours and I have read many of your works. I am looking forward to more of this and your other series.

Pet mommy series

This is a comment about the series as a whole, simply brilliant. One of, if not the best erotic stories I've read. Keep up the good work. More please.

WOW

This whole series is a total turn on! From a woman's point of view this could so easily happen. Everything written by this author has been great! Can't wait for the next chapter. Would love to see how son and daughter finally hooked up.

Keep up the good work!

Loved them all!!

I only hope that there are many more coming. I'll read them all.
Thank you very much. The best was when you switched the mother daughter. That was fabulous when her daughter took over the Domme role. Wonderful!!

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