All Comments on 'Will You Love Me 'Til I Die? Ch. 24'

You managed to maintain interest from start to finish. I sincerely hope you are planning or working on your next novel.

The touches of erotic being timely placed, the travels being described eloquently (I've been to many of those destinations) and the smooth addition of characters, with some continuing along through the story line to this point, was perfect and easy for the reader to pick-up on.

From my perspective having read each chapter at an enjoyable pace, the majority of the entire adventurous project seemed flawless as I was lucky enough to read it.

BRAVO!!! Continue!

Incredlble story

The story from start to finish was Great hope you do another one

Please continue!!??

There is still so much left to this story and would love to see it!!

anamazing and sumptious surround of love in all its scintilating variety i thuroughly enjoyed the tandra outcomes thank you from my heart

I have read both of your long stories (this one and Fantasy Sex Cruise). Both were great and enjoyable; I especially appreciate that you provide a conclusion. So many authors on Literotica just stop/or drop the story without summary or conclusion.

Please write another...soon.

Well written and highly arousing. But as a man, I think the amount of orgasms that Carl could achieve was a little over the top.