Awesome start
Very interesting start.
a very good tease. think this is going to be interesting.......Looking forward to the next bite of the story.Yes bite not bit. GP
good tease I look forward to your next installment
I never expected to read porn structured as a legal document !!!! Keep it up! (that goes to your other works too )
Fantastic writing and a sexy scenario. Thanks for posting!
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Awesome start
loved it.
Very interesting start.
yes
a very good tease. think this is going to be interesting.......Looking forward to the next bite of the story.Yes bite not bit. GP
great start
good tease I look forward to your next installment
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I never expected to read porn structured as a legal document !!!! Keep it up! (that goes to your other works too )
Wow this was good!
Fantastic writing and a sexy scenario. Thanks for posting!
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