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Ok...so, where is the incest part? Or the spelling, for that matter...
what the hell
there was not one act of incest in this I feel ripped off and rate you as a zero for wasting my time
Wrong category
Been asked already so delete and re post in the correct category
Zero
Wrong category. And you named your charecter after a known pornstar. What's next? "Lisa Ann Housewife" under Sci-fi fantasy? Or "sasha grey detective" - nonhuman?
Gee sorry that I don't know the name of every single fucking pornstar and also, what catagory should I put it into? There is literally no category for straight up kinky sex.
Belongs in 'Erotic Encounters' rather than 'Incest/Taboo'
Although an argument could be made for saying that illicit sexual encounters in the office and workplace are borderline taboo (don't forget, a story subject-matter doesn't have to be about incest to be taboo), but not bad for someone who's only been a member for a couple of weeks and has posted only one other chapter of this story.
Your spelling needs a little polishing, and I'd possibly take a second look at your sentence structure if I were you, but overall, a good 3 stars, not bad for a first story; with a little refinement the next chapter could be a 4 or 5.
It also might be a good idea to throw in a little incest in part 3 to shut the yappers up...
Admin. Error?
I would think that it would be up to the Literotica administrators to classify the material. The writers write and submit. In my opinion, it's a little over the top, yet still well written! Hopefully, part three is still coming! I know that I will be, looking for it, that is! Got ya!
Fun story no matter what category it belongs in! But if her father finds out how his little girl is making money, well then it just might end up an incest story after all. Can't wait for next chapter.
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