All Comments on 'Frozen Hearts Don't Beat Pt. 11-12'

I won't be updating until I have at least 20 comments/votes. Also, I would love more interaction with my readers! And this story has a very poor rating, can you tell me what you didn't like so I don't do it again? It would be much appreciated! Ciao! ~Scarl3tt3

I know you told us all that you don't really intend to have plot, but this is REALLY without plot. It's too rushed to be enjoyable. You also pull in characters that you don't explain how they even got there. Jack Frost was a random pull in, and then you tossed him out. Same for Flynn and Rapunzel. You can't use FROZEN and not tell us all that you're removing certain FROZEN aspects...

How about a bit more plot and some better fucking? No more abrupt cuts or changes.. You also list it as Lesbian but it's not completely.. I'd remove that tag. Caio!

As a kid I would look up to Disney princesses as role models, and now I watch them and cum like hell!!!

Keep writing! This is SO good! I love the Flynn and Rupunzel please do a Elsunzel scene!

I love this story please don't stop! And elsarunzel scene sounds so awesome!!!!!!