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Prodigal of Blue

byLauren Hynde©
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by Anonymous

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by Colleen Thomas01/16/04

Speechless

Moving, it really speaks to me. Excellent!

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by twelveoone11/17/04

I cannot pick

out any part that is better, all consistently good, magic

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by Anonymous11/10/05

Wow

Just... the words...the imagery...beautiful.

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by duddle14612/28/06

Exquisite.

Unbelievable imagery with boundless word pictures that paint the stories meaning. An interesting illustration accompanies this rendering ~ adding to it's charm.

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by LeBroz02/05/07

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Excellently done; makes me think of poetry written at least a century ago (or more). The type that is not immediately grasped on first reading but has such rich flavor that you want to go back for repreat tastings.

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by LeBroz05/27/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.



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by Anonymous09/13/11

my first poetry review online

I am a college graduate (BBA)and am well read besides, but still had some trouble understanding the seldom used words such as auric, balaster, arpeggio of inter-reveri (have no clue what that is)and unsure what "de-lis" means in conjunction with terraces. SO, if the author intended this poem to be read by the common man, she will not reach her audience. I liked the imagery, it flowed, but other than that, it did not make a point. What was the conclusion or is this just part of the total.

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by tazz31702/14/12

WHILE SAILING

the ages of time. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous08/31/17

Gorgeous

Timeless and yet dreams of far flung lands, stars and nebulae calling mariners to venture and see.. Very nice...

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by sanishen02/26/18

very sensual

and rather gorgeous - such beautiful colours.

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