by TamLin01
I've read every one of them. They are all great. Please keep writing.
Nicely done. You took an almost worn out subject and gave it a different spin. I liked how you played this out.
Chapter 1
Really interesting story, intriguing and creepy. Great characterization and attention to details. The main character, Rose, is well developed and interesting, and the storyline is exciting and chilling. The alley scene was especially intense. Keep up the great work, you are talented. Looking forward to reading more.