Beside big Boobs and a nice voice what does she look like? Be descriptive of the characters. Just my opinion. Have someone from Literotica proof read to help you and give you ideas to help improve your story.
Somewhat a three but if thus was in ero/coup a five.
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Anonymous05/17/15
Meh
Its like you were writing the words as fast as you spurred your fantasy. the build up, sex, and anal was all rushed. little detail over than "here is what happened and it was good"
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Beside big Boobs and a nice voice what does she look like? Be descriptive of the characters. Just my opinion. Have someone from Literotica proof read to help you and give you ideas to help improve your story.
Thanks***
For the read.
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Somewhat a three but if thus was in ero/coup a five.
Meh
Its like you were writing the words as fast as you spurred your fantasy. the build up, sex, and anal was all rushed. little detail over than "here is what happened and it was good"
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