Very Hot.
A sweeping, lusty, runaway stream of consciousness. Stream? No, rather make that a river. A great big flooding river of Lust. In a word: "HOT"!
a nice basic premise but needs more depth to it
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Very Hot.
A sweeping, lusty, runaway stream of consciousness.
Stream? No, rather make that a river.
A great big flooding river of Lust.
In a word: "HOT"!
too short
a nice basic premise but needs more depth to it
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More submissions by intriguess.