All Comments on 'Driving Companion'

Good 'nuff.

Thanks.

I've traveled plenty with my job over the past years. I've shared the same fantasy and identified with yours. Well written.

The entire story was great, and well written. The ending got a 5 star vote from me, lol.

Took me places that i may have thought about. A couple of assholes have never been there. Thanks.

You are an artist, my friend. Your story navigated the complexity of a mid-life identity crisis with skill and grace, all the while bringing the reader through a (dream) encounter that was both hot and thought-provoking. You've given me something to think about for my own writing, as well as for my own life. Well done, BillAdams - I will look for more of your stories!

keep on trucking tenbears 43

Great stuff then a crappy killjoy ending/

Old guys want to believe that something like this could happen, even if it's just in a story. In fairness, I can't/won't rate it.

I guess the story could have ended worse. He could have been arrested for indecent exposure, lost his job, his family and been divorced by his wife. That would be have been a real twist of an ending, huh?

Thanks for the comments and feedback, positive or negative alike. Sorry if the ending disappointed too much. I wanted to keep some sense of reality. The emotional journey remains the same. - Bill

Very engaging and real. The ending made it even more realistic and brought a grin to my lips.

That was a nice twist that I didn't see coming!!

Well written. Great twist at the end, loved it.