All Comments on 'Wearing The Other Shoe'

by pappy1918

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Eh

Very poorly written. Couldn't follow it at times and it was difficult to read or understand at others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
liked it

i like the idea, but you really need an editor. It's "a lot" not "Allot" and "add insult to injury" not "ad".

but fun idea...made me hard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Learn to edit

This is completely unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

all women want to use a strapon on them but, men want to try it because they see it as gay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
When did they take his clothese off? Oops.

Oops.

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