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loved it
great story but do the brother and sister ever get it on and do they continue or just stop there
Great!
I really liked this story. Thanks!
Could use improvements, but good
This should be in the incest section, but it was well written. The guy was way too fucking sensitive for my taste, but it is a good story.
no did not like it
i hated it the brother was 2 sensitive and if he was older then her shudnt he no how 2 fuck! bloody hell hated the immuturity too
bad story sorry
too unrealistic
that sounded like me when i was 7 yrs old...by 18 they should know what its about at LEAST!
Nice story
Get real people, this is a story not a documentary. They are obviously not experienced and completely without knowledge and that is the very cute point of the story. It was easy to read, simple and erotic..
Bobby ak Trapper
What's wrong with unrealistic in fuck fiction?
To the dissenter who zero-ed this story: when you're limited to age-18 characters, what do you expect? This is one of those situations where the author has kept to the letter of the rules but clearly the characters are about 14. Unease with the process at that age is normal. Sure the proto-lesbianism is distracting for a heterosexual story, but it provides an edge and they overcome it nicely. The author should follow this up with another chapter.
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