by apple231601
even by your standards this is seriously hot, can't wait to see the rest!
Wow that sex scene was hot as hell, and the main character in this is really great.
this was amazing and sexy as hell, just like always, I can't wait for to see what you write next.
Fantastic beginning to a story that could continue to be entertaining and expansive.
Your stories are all kinds of fun. Thanks for sharing!
What an opening act. Your genius knows no bounds! Can't wait to see where this goes.
Just love it! Your work is the reason I visit the site. Please continue this one! Great fun and seriosuly sexy stories!
I love the language of the story .One of best i've read so far