Mixed tenses, run-on sentences and punctuation errors punctuate (pun intended) this story throughout.
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Anonymous04/18/16
So many errors, bad grammar, missing punctuation and sentences that make no sense I had to give up.
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Anonymous07/02/16
mom incest
incest is in the bible started with adam n eve and continued with noah and his family after the flood so incest is god approved.i am having sex with a niece she is 30 i am 60 and we live together
English
Very tasteful
You have broached a delicate topic in a very tasteful way.
I stopped reading
The incest was just to casual like it's an everyday thing. Fail.
Needs Some Serious Editing
Mixed tenses, run-on sentences and punctuation errors punctuate (pun intended) this story throughout.
So many errors, bad grammar, missing punctuation and sentences that make no sense I had to give up.
mom incest
incest is in the bible started with adam n eve and continued with noah and his family after the flood so incest is god approved.i am having sex with a niece she is 30 i am 60 and we live together
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