Super hot. Can't wait to read more.
Thank you for your comment - much appreciated
When is The Pool Ch. 04 gonna come out?
I really couldn't read past the part where the brother was rubbing lotion on her and they started saying 'eh!' a lot . It's really annoying to be honest and I feel the story would be better without it .
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! orBack to The Pool Ch. 03 orMore submissions by Lovelylucie.
[...]
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Posting...
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about The Pool Ch. 03:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Preview comment
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to Lovelylucie:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Send feedback
Sending...
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Username:
Password:Forgot your password?
Security code:
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save Cancel
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.
Close
English
Super hot. Can't wait to read more.
Thank you
Thank you for your comment - much appreciated
Shemurr
When is The Pool Ch. 04 gonna come out?
"Eh"
I really couldn't read past the part where the brother was rubbing lotion on her and they started saying 'eh!' a lot . It's really annoying to be honest and I feel the story would be better without it .
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Pool Ch. 03 or
More submissions by Lovelylucie.