Well written, very original (or at least a very original "remake").
Made me laugh. One for the favourites' page.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
I was entertained and was laughing until I got creeped out thinking about that movie The Accused, in which a character played by Jodi Foster was being gang-raped on a pinball machine. Reading the chant "Fuck her, fuck her ..." reminded me of the moment of conscience, when the men cheering on what they may initially have thought was wild sex could have stopped the attach when they clearly saw the woman was being raped.
Sorry to be the heavy here.
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