All Comments on 'They Were Both Spanked'

I LOVE THIS STORY. I WISH IT WAS ME GETTING SPANK

More spankings, please!

The content of this story was a very enticing one but the writing was so bad and the grammar so awful that following t was difficult. It also took the reader OUT of the world of the story that was set up!. TOMRAY can't write, unfortunately. Although the story idea was great, the execution was a failure.