All Comments on 'Normal Ch. 01-03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

keep writing more please

wolf9696wolf9696almost 9 years ago
5/5

WOOOOH.....WAITING FOR MORE PLS

Ready2BServicedReady2BServicedalmost 9 years ago
4 Stars

I enjoyed it. I can't wait for more newer experiences and i wonder who will be her first vagina sex, anal and when and who will clue her into finding out her sperm is fertile. How many women will she impregnate? Does getting women pregnant become a fetish? Will she ever wear protection? Make the women she is and will have sex with get on birth control? Money? Will she be in her children's lives? I can't wait to read what the future holds. I saw that she has both genitals, anything happening there? Possible sex with males. Details about her description?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So much u can do

it's a nice story hope u hav more to come! I would probably make Nancy n Amanda hav a affair??? I would maybe hav Sally take over Amanda house n any belongings??? Maybe target a few more teachers via Amanda?? Try to put as much detail as u can n forcus more around Amanda than anyone else hav Sally hav pocession with people who Amanda loves friends relatives that she comes across????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more more

Good story!

Give me more please.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Very hot! Keep writing, I think we're all looking forward to the next....

....installment.

She seems a little hung up on blow jobs, but the explanation is reasonable, so sets expectation and tone for the unfolding story.

I'm sure this will set off a spate of Funtanari with MC powers stories in all their possible varieties over the next several months.

Good on ya, mate!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So great !

I personally love stories with a lot of blowjobs, so this was perfect for me ! 5 Stars !!!

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