All Comments on 'Meeting My Crush Again'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
bodyguard loves it

Your bodyguard loves it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
An English major wouldn't

...use "Mary's sick so it's just you and me who meets at Starbucks in the school's main library." It would be you and I. I'm also not a fan of second person stories. What's Mary got to do with the story? Will it be important in later parts?

G88smithG88smithalmost 9 years ago
Well done

Great first attempt. Enjoyed it a lot. Keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good first story

definitely will look forward to future stories and also would love to hear your voice

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