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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Being French…

…your pitiful tentative at speaking French is a huge turn off. She switches to English when you don't know how to say things in French, and even when you think you know… oh my…

“Due basie moi”, seriously? Without the translation, I couldn't have guessed that you tried to say “Dure baise moi”, which means absolutely nothing but can be a shitty automatic translation for “Baise-moi fort”.

Meh… The story wasn't bad, but not good enough either for me to keep an erection while you rape my mother tongue.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[04.11.22]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

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Sharing my stories. Some of these are based off my own experiences, others are pure fiction. I'll leave it to you to decide which is which. I'm also super new to writing, so hopefully in time my ability to build a picutre for people to lose themselves in gets better.