All Comments on 'Xi Ch. 03'

by nerbus

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Well done!

Wow. Nerbus, you truly are a skilled writer! So far, I love it. You paint a truly vivid picture and capture Xi's delicious torment perfectly! You should consider a professional career if you haven't already.

MistaRheeMistaRheealmost 16 years ago
Make that a 2nd reader who believes in your skills

I'll echo the words of the first responder--you have a good touch for the 'right' words and terrific story construction. Nothing else, there's more to read....

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