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Very nice start!
Very promising!Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Thank you very much.
Wow ... You know
I try to give feedback on the stories I read. It is only fair if I get to enjoy a wonderful story, he author should get the benefit some kind of recognition. I read a lot of stories and sometimes I do not have time at the moment to write what I would like. In the case of this story I did not have time to write. This is my second time reading this so I could not miss the opportunity a second time.
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES THAT I HAVE EVER READ!
The time you spent to build up was just right, and the story is so true to life!
I hope you are planning more chapters! I will be looking for more.
Excellent!
Very good build to story, love the innocence starting out, and her hard nipples...
Masturbation
An interesting story of young man ogling an older woman masturbate. That scene was over the top but hot. Looking forward to Chapter Two which I can read right now.
One grammatical error I noticed: a which where there should have been a who. Minor problem.
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