This isn't even a really taboo but a crappy dream of the girl.
I liked your story but it needs to be longer. The characters don't have to much background so all you really get is a good start of a potentially good story.
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Its just a crappy dream of the girl
This isn't even a really taboo but a crappy dream of the girl.
needs to be longer
I liked your story but it needs to be longer. The characters don't have to much background so all you really get is a good start of a potentially good story.
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