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AngelineAngelinealmost 9 years ago
Controlled emotion

There's a great tension between the emotion of the subject and the determination of the narrator to keep emotion under control. It works really well here (and you know I am wishing for the best for you.) xx

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 9 years ago
Annie , all the best ....

Great poem here : my heartfelt prayers to Mother Kali to keep you safe , sound & healthy ....( am determined Not to put any exclamation marks here ) BTW i 5-ed .

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