by patricia51
I enjoyed all 4 chapters and thought they were done well for a shifting POV story. My favorite was the first, but they are all very enjoyable. I didn't exactly buy the ending of Ch4 because so much had been skipped in the telling, but it wasn't anything that interfered with my enjoyment of the whole.
The sudden rough coupling in the bookstore was not believable, and the sudden appearance of the husband's boss and wife at the shore was also too calculated.