All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 04: Jackie's Story'

by DarkFantasy56

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PlegamansPlegamansalmost 9 years ago
More please

I hope you will continue Jackie's story. It looks like she can give David a run for his money.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More Please?

I sure hope you will continue Jackie's Story!

FindmywayFindmywayalmost 9 years ago
Hmmm....

Please continue. Did the agency share her background - he seems to be blindside with both her physical and intellectual strength.

I like the way Jackie is challenging him in ways he didn't expect. I hope you continue the dynamic between the two - where they both continue to grow.

I am enjoying their interaction more than Linda and Ben's

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